Seven

The Boy with the Coat

The doctor’s name should have been Sam. He had the hair of a Sam. He spoke in introductions, bodies and conclusions. Every sentence was a micro-essay. In effect, he said everything thrice. I now know with three times as much certainty that I have a common, unthreatening cough.

The woman with the limp goes in next. It doesn’t take very long. Soon Sam comes out and has a word with the secretary. The secretary shuffles some papers, then files some, sorts through others, and finally finds what the doctor is after. The woman with the limp fishes around in her bag and presents a similar document. Sam stamps both, and all is well. The woman is welcome to come back tomorrow to stamp some more papers if she still isn’t better.

In comes a boy with a coat. He takes off his hat and asks the secretary a question. She shakes her head. He searches his pockets, but doesn’t find quite what he’s after. The secretary offers the phone, but he’s no-one to call. They talk for a moment more and come to no solution. The boy with the coat leaves with no fuss.

The secretary shuffles more papers uncomfortably.

By now the boy is probably out on the street. He wraps his coat around him and trudges along, concerned about his wellbeing. He might just have an ordinary cough. An ordinary cough and an extraordinarily slow rate of healing. But he can’t find out, now. And neither can Sam. Nor the secretary, nor the woman with the limp, nor I. He could be dead in a drain next month, with none of us any the wiser.

3 responses

  1. Seventeen

    Maybe the boy with the coat was just asking for some money for a lozenge. One of those throat curing ones. Digging into his pockets, showing the miss how little money he did have. Cough cough. Out he went, he’d ask someone else.

    I just don’t get why he didn’t ask you.

    June 14th, 2007 at 00:55

  2. Amber

    This was very interesting. I think it sad that the boy with the coat was turned away. I want him to get better.

    June 14th, 2007 at 01:27

  3. Dr George

    Interesting, Alice. I note that many of your stories have macabre undertones, but none so much as this, which is very much so.

    June 14th, 2007 at 08:38

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